good work ray, could you please draw your parrallel projections in pen, also your third one is not a parrallel projection its an axonometric.
Regarding your crysis model. The positioning of your three spaces is good. Keep your rectangles where they are but size them one more time. Do newtons laboratory have to be bigger on the ocean? is it half submerged? how would you contrast the many spaces that agnesi has? how are you going to illustrate the entry to newtons laboratory in your detail (by boat, by stairs, off a cliff?) and likewise for agnesi (cut a path on your landscape?). What you different distinct approaches to the discussion space are you going to provide and what is going to happen there?
All these will come out on your textures and details, your textures should also be more appropriately scaled this time around.
good work ray, could you please draw your parrallel projections in pen, also your third one is not a parrallel projection its an axonometric.
ReplyDeleteRegarding your crysis model. The positioning of your three spaces is good. Keep your rectangles where they are but size them one more time. Do newtons laboratory have to be bigger on the ocean? is it half submerged? how would you contrast the many spaces that agnesi has? how are you going to illustrate the entry to newtons laboratory in your detail (by boat, by stairs, off a cliff?) and likewise for agnesi (cut a path on your landscape?). What you different distinct approaches to the discussion space are you going to provide and what is going to happen there?
All these will come out on your textures and details, your textures should also be more appropriately scaled this time around.
Good work so far and good luck.
oh my god,I am doing the 36 texture, I am fixing the parallel. They will on the blog tomorrow.
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